Adrenaline rushes through my blood.
The pure sound of amplified metal races towards my body.
The Moshpit is filled with anger and freedom,
it's an addictive feeling that I have no control over.
A monster has been unleashed,
slamming my body around the room.
Riding this wave of ephedrine along the shore of my feelings,
feeling tougher than a bump of raw medicine.
The urge to break loose and go wild has kicked in;
with each ripple of screaming emotions through the speakers,
I feel liberated from the chains of stress holding me down.
This is where I release my rage. This is Hardcore Punk.
After reading a few of your posts, I feel like you're trying to force the metaphors and creativity. It should just come naturally to you, that way your writing can flow more coherently. You seem to have a lot of talent that just needs some tweaking.
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Happy Blogging.
I will take that into account from now, thanks for the comment though. More posts are coming soon. Hope you enjoy them!
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